The below is a computer generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

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This poem, titled "Bad Dad," explores the consequences of neglecting one's familial responsibilities in favor of pursuing romantic interests. The use of imagery, such as the comparison to a volcanic eruption and the reference to sirens, effectively conveys the overwhelming sense of guilt and regret felt by the narrator. However, the poem suffers from a lack of cohesion and structure. The abrupt shifts in tone and focus make it difficult to follow the narrative thread. Additionally, the rhyme scheme feels forced and at times detracts from the overall message of the poem.

One suggested line edit:
Instead of "he's deaf to all demands of duty," consider changing it to "he's blinded by his love's sweet beauty." This change maintains the theme of the narrator's infatuation with his romantic partner while using a more concise and impactful phrase.

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of the entire piece
would change if the line written by the AI was used.
I see the misperception in the AI's view; by using logic, sarcasm is cast aside.

"The use of imagery, such as the comparison
to a volcanic eruption and the reference to sirens, effectively conveys the overwhelming
sense of guilt and regret by the narrator" is wrong.

This man has been a widower or divorcee long enough, he wishes to have a meaningful relationship
with a person that can fulfill the needs that the rest of the family cannot provide.
They are being selfish in demanding the time that used to be spent with them, and maybe they are a little
bit jealous and anxious that his wife, their mother is being replaced in some way.

~ Geezer.
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For some reason I find it sweet that they’re jealous of the time you spend writing. They must live you a lot.

Nice job poet,
You’ve got great rhythm
Tim