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on aging

Bifocal glasses- on once sparkling eyes
My past the point waist
Requires a large size
Aging triceps flap in the wind
I am reminded of this when I wave at a friend
Ponderous breasts - men see as a tease
No longer do they defy gravity
Rogue hairs grow randomly
on my chin like weeds
And sweat on my forehead erupts in beads
I am a scarred warrior of 'what has been'
My arsenal- spray tan and anti-aging cream
Relief! Reprieve from battle - at the end of my day
in dreams, my brain will have its way
And give me furlough in the night
A little encouragement for the fight
free to dream .....
And fantasize ....
that I am beautiful
and young again.

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in the club! LOL This was a great read and so true to life. Many thanks. ~ Geezer.

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Lovely write, welcome to the Curmudgeons group, there are many of us now and we nearly out number the young lol
There hiding in the shadows was a form
The form was of a former physical beauty
The beauty had forgotten that beauty is within
Not noticing the light that glowed from her within
Never lose sight of what you are.
Stand in the light and give out love
There you will shine as any new sun.
Yours, Ian.

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