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Age (prose poem)

A paper moth strung from a candy gloss vellum embossed with micro pastel flowers and autographed library ISBS scanned in constellate ions of hypnopomp.

Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Editing stage: 


like eyes in the mall
on the bus
see what we think we like to want
and get it...
does it make happiness
or is it just another hypnotist
showering us with praise
to sweep into the collection

Love the Hypnopomp line

thank you!

You are a discerning commentator


author comment

Im reading your surreal poems with hungry eyes, digesting, my brain is pregnant with standing ovulations ;O

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