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streshenkofftheresa
Member since June 12, 2026
Member for 1 month, 5 days
You Were My Everything
You were my everything
You were my best friend
Always by my side
Always down for the ride
One day you were here
The next one you were gone
Honored to have had you in my life
Growing up, we were ever so close
My heart got ripped
Right out of my chest
On that faithful night
That you were taken away
My brother, you were
And always will be
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With a special place in my heart
That you always filled with glee
At times I feel your presence
As if you’re here with me
We had a twin type bond
That can never be explained
A part of me died with you
The night you lost your life
And was taken away from me
Heartbroken I will always be
streshenkofftheresa’s timeline
- July 2026
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12 SunNew follower
@Trouble
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11 SatReceived a critique
on Here Now Forever from @Geezer
"I did change a couple of tiny things to make a better flow, but nothing that changes the personal touch." -
11 SatReceived a critique
on Here Now Forever from @Geezer
"with the lines and I think I have made it just a bit smoother. I didn't change a word, just put the stanzas in a different order. but it's your work, do it how you feel. ~ Geez. Here.Now.Forever You cannot do this to me…" -
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09 ThuReceived a critique
on You Have Always Been My Hero from @Tink
"Raw and dripping with emotion!! One can't help to send positive vibes to both you and your mom!!! (which I am, btw) Knowing that this is a VERY personal piece, there are a few things that need to be addressed. Because i…" -
08 WedCritiqued
"Battleground" by @Tink
"This is so beautiful and powerful I just love it gives me hope I’m gonna show my mom this one" -
08 WedCritiqued
"Cancer Sucks! (Acrostic, Edited)" by @Tink
"This is great tink my mom has breast cancer and I have a few about it myself" -
08 WedCritiqued
"Cancer Sucks! (Acrostic, Edited)" by @Tink
"This is great tink my mom has breast cancer and I have a few about it myself" -
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04 SatReceived a critique
on Chaos Combined from @Tink
"I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!! GREAT JOB!!! I can relate, I can understand and its like you are sitting in my mind with me. BRAVO!!! WELL DONE!! I can offer no suggestions for this one. You nailed it!!! Live, Love & Laugh! (A…" -
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03 FriNew follower
@alicespagnol7
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02 ThuReceived a critique
on Life In Vain from @Asa B.
"Very consistent with the rhyme, flow, and overall shape of the piece. It witnesses an End from the side of the fallen. What particularly caught my eye was "Memories past shall remain". For life to end is one tragedy, ye…" -
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- June 2026
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30 TueAdded to bookshelf
Poetry Book
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30 TueCritiqued
"The Mourning Bride " by @TheDarkKing
"This is great it flows seamlessly to me your an amazing writer my friend" -
30 TueCritiqued
"The Mourning Bride " by @TheDarkKing
"This is great it flows seamlessly to me your an amazing writer my friend" -
28 SunReceived a critique
on Bipolar Thoughts from @Lavender
"So well said - and written. Though I noticed it, the inconsistent rhyme did not take anything away from the poem at all. It actually helped it feel a bit more honest, somehow. "Trying to survive the lightning in the bla…" -
28 SunCritiqued
"Dreams " by @TheDarkKing
"This is great I love the way it flows and it is awesome cool write" -
27 SatCritiqued
"24/06" by @Cpwe Skele
"Wow this is such a powerful write I think you did an amazing job conveying emotion here" -
27 SatNew follower
@unwittingfantast
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27 SatNew follower
@TheDarkKing
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19 FriFirst critique offered
on "Mentalities " by @Trouble
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15 MonHighest posting month
June 2026 — 21 poems
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12 FriFirst publication
A Dream By The Bipolar Mind
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12 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
Bookshelf
| Book | Where to find it | Files | Added |
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| Poetry Book | View on Amazon → | — | Jun 30, 2026 |
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About Me
I am just a poet who didn’t know it expressing myself through my words
Location: USA
Recent Work
Life In Vain
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