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unwittingfantast

Member since June 27, 2026

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Jasmine

Posted Jun 27, 2026 · 16 lines · 4 critiques

My future, cloaked deeply in jasmine

My past, wrung out, dripping away

Caught in a moment, I'm helpless

The tides tugging toward a new day

He spills and he spills ‘til he's empty

To settle unspeakable debts

Gratitude begs for forgiveness

But justice says not to forget

They're trying to mend what is broken

I'm filling their pockets with stones

Paralysis of the contrasting

Seeps deep into unstable bones

Within me are forces chaotic

Without me, a hollowness stains

So I spin the broad wheel of good fortune

With hope my foundation remains

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June 2026
27 Sat

Received a critique
on Jasmine from @Tink
"I enjoyed this read. Great picture painting with your words! I have read this a few times and have no suggestions to offer. Well done. Welcome to Neopoet!! I hope to see you in the chatroom! We are planning to have them…"
27 Sat

Received a critique
on Jasmine from @streshenkofftheresa
"This is great girl I love it it’s beautifully written great job"
27 Sat

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@streshenkofftheresa
27 Sat

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Jasmine
27 Sat

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Jasmine
"My future, cloaked deeply in jasmine"
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Just an amateur writer looking to express myself & connect with likeminded people. I'm always looking to improve my writing, so respectful constructive criticisms are very appreciated!

Location: USA

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