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hbserge
Member since June 11, 2026
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Red Dawn Sky
Red dawn sky reflecting in these eyes of mine
An orange light above the red clouds
The most beautiful sound is when everything is quiet
When the thoughts are silent, moments seem better
Our relationship with nature is one we have to preserve
Listen to the words of your consciousness
It's kind of like the spirit washes away your sins when you are outside
Refreshed within the body and mind
Here we level up as we align with the stars
Scars healed
Truth revealed inside your heart
A spark reignites
Across from you and me, the red dawn sky passes
Nighttime turns into morning
We are alive as a new day comes
hbserge’s timeline
- July 2026
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04 SatReceived a critique
on Red Dawn Sky from @Anonymous Alexander
"The rhythm of this poem is quite flowing, which complements the subject matter. However, I think that some of the phrasing such as "moments seem better" and "truth revealed inside your heart" could be strengthened by re…" -
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01 WedReceived a critique
on Another Life from @W. Barrett Munn
"I agree with AI that the strongest point in your poem is: My mind has settled down/ Take me hand/ Let's leave this town. Why does that work? First, it's visual, creating a scene we can imagine. Poetry is, after all, sto…" -
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- June 2026
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30 TuePosted a poem
Heart's Desire
"When it's necessary to follow your heart's desire, will you follow the fire that burns within?" -
24 WedReceived a critique
on Blood Money from @Geezer
"a real commitment to rap of old here. If you were to beat this out, you would see what I mean. I got it; the sense of the beat, the rap of a youngster coming up, who sees those with the most, give the least. Good start…" -
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15 MonHighest posting month
June 2026 — 9 poems
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13 SatReceived a critique
on State Of The World from @Obadiah Grey
"You don't need the last line! (I agree wholeheartedly with you) Obi." -
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11 ThuPosted a poem
Pleasant Surprise
"It's a pleasant surprise when life guides you towards the right direction." -
11 ThuReceived a critique
on Silent Fire from @Geezer
"answer better than the AI here. It makes perfect sense to incorporate rhythm and meter as the fuel that drives the whole thing. Your thought seems to flow well, and you express the frustration of everyday man. ~ Geezer" -
11 ThuFirst publication
Silent Fire
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About Me
About me
I write poetry for mental health.
Social Worker/Author/Poet
Location: CAN
Recent Work
Red Dawn Sky
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Another Life
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Heart's Desire
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Blood Money
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Vibrations
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Righteous Victory
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All We Need
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Pleasant Surprise
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