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Spider's Meditation (Haiku)

skeins of silken thread
euclidean arabesques
a perfect crochet

Written: 20/11/2007

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Love that second line for the webs..gives it so much to visualise as if it dances..very nicely done haiku style here.

Chez
"The perfect woman perpetrates literature as she does a small sin: as an experiment, in passing, to see if anybody notices it - and to makes sure that somebody does." - Nietzsche

One of the most delightful sights is to watch a spider weaving its web. Once I had to see this at close quarters.

Cheers

Leonard Daranjo

"When the waiting stops, the living begins"

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Amazing! One could get lost in its beauty. ~A

The beauty in nature is humbling.

Cheers

Leonard Daranjo

"When the waiting stops, the living begins"

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As is the perfection. Although I think I've seen a few drunken or psychotic spider's webs..

~A

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