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sympathetic gesture in pennies
perched upon a pallet
each powerful pull
prompting further
his pickled pitch of pep
all promises
proclamations
played out
and unproductive
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
weirdelf
Wed, 2012-08-15 22:29
Great to see you back, mate!
A sound, effective piece, elegantly written. Great title.
proclomations [proclamations].
Hope to see more of you.
cheers,
Jess
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