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Dec 11, 2009
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Black Candles
black candles in the night
soft flicking light
casting our shadows on the wall
not much talk, bedroom eyes say it all
cheap wine drank from a jelly glass
she's no Lady and she has no class
she turns up the radio
to drown out, our little rodeo
with a grin on her face
she moves with grace
this woman all in black
leaving marks on my back
tomorrow I'll have to pay
for this night of play
I know the cost will be great
this woman loves with all the passion of hate
when she's through, all her charm is gone
then once more, I'll be alone
but some day she will return
with her black candles to burn
then again, somewhere in the night
I'll miss her parting flight.
copyright 2001 hippiepoet69
soft flicking light
casting our shadows on the wall
not much talk, bedroom eyes say it all
cheap wine drank from a jelly glass
she's no Lady and she has no class
she turns up the radio
to drown out, our little rodeo
with a grin on her face
she moves with grace
this woman all in black
leaving marks on my back
tomorrow I'll have to pay
for this night of play
I know the cost will be great
this woman loves with all the passion of hate
when she's through, all her charm is gone
then once more, I'll be alone
but some day she will return
with her black candles to burn
then again, somewhere in the night
I'll miss her parting flight.
copyright 2001 hippiepoet69
— hippiepoet69, Dec 11, 2009
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September Daydreams
16 years 5 months ago
Black
hippiepoet69
16 years 4 months ago
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Electric Blue
16 years 4 months ago
black Candles
hippiepoet69
16 years 4 months ago
Thanks Electric Blue
ngaioBeck
16 years 3 months ago
Black Candles
hippiepoet69
16 years 3 months ago
Sounds good
pamela
16 years 1 month ago
flickering light
hippiepoet69
16 years 1 month ago
Sounds good
Candlewitch
16 years 1 month ago
Hello Huey
hippiepoet69
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks Cat