Janice Pearce

Nov 05, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Triolet~Beauty's Death

A kaleidoscope of silky womb
is dancing beauty's death.
A fate of unsuspecting doom
A kaleidoscope of silky womb
Victims spun in ghostly tombs,
as the weaver awaits another guest.
A kaleidoscope of silky womb
is dancing beauty's death.

— Janice Pearce, Nov 05, 2009

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Country/Region: USA

Critiques

Kailashana

16 years 7 months ago

Janice, nice to see your

Janice, nice to see your *return*... you have such an ease with your poetry--in difficult & specific forms such as your triolet; your subject matter always enticing and rewarding. ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha

Janice Pearce

16 years 7 months ago

~A

Busy time of the year for me, lots of hours at work so time is limited for reading and writing. I appreciate your thoughts so much!! ___________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

Ravenshakti

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Janice...

This is exquisite... You weave your words, smoothly; creating a tapestry for us. I love the feeling and touch of this poem. Thank you for sharing it. Raven

Janice Pearce

16 years 7 months ago

Raven

Your thoughts are always appreciated, thanks so much for reading and commenting! _____________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

themoonman

16 years 7 months ago

Janice...

It is good to see you, hope all is well. The triolet is not a form I'm fond of, repetition in form, but you've written about a subject that not only interests, but is accentuated with the form... well done! typo... you left the "k" out in the next to the last line. Richard

Janice Pearce

16 years 7 months ago

Beauty's Death

I am working lots of hours, and I miss reading and posting as often as I would like. Thanks for your respone to this one. And thank you for pointing out my error in spelling! __________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Janice

Amazing as usual and I am so pleased I did not miss this. Love from Lyz. XX

Janice Pearce

16 years 7 months ago

Lyz

I appreciate your thoughts here, Lyz. Thank you! __________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

Natascha Tallowin

16 years 4 months ago

Beautiful. I adore the

Beautiful. I adore the imagery. Nx

Janice Pearce

16 years 4 months ago

Triolet~Beauty's Death

Nx, Thank you for taking the time to read, and comment I appreciate your thoughts. So busy at work but I will try to read some of your postings! _____________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

Electric Blue

16 years 2 months ago

Beauty's Death

Janice Triolet I am intrigued by this form but not yet mastered it yet with a theme still waiting in the wings for it to appear to me. This is truely exquisite Electric blue

Janice Pearce

16 years 2 months ago

Beauty's Death

Electric Blue, First of all, sorry it took me so long to reply to your comment. Your thoughts are always appreciated. Hopefully you have written one? Let me know! __________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous

Candlewitch

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Janice

What can I say that has not already been said? It is both lovely and sad. You have been missed! always, Cat

Janice Pearce

16 years 2 months ago

Beauty's Death

Cat, I am sorry it took so long for me to respond. I appreciate your feedback, always. Hope to read and comment more in the future! __________________________________________________ Income-tax forms should be more realistic by allowing the taxpayer to list "Uncle Sam" as a dependent Anonymous