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Oct 06, 2009
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Haunted with Dreams
In Haunting night
falling into dream,
in softness a cloud
glowed at the seams
Bounced into rain
I was soaking up love,
rain brought blessings
and sings of the dove
Falling with stars
ash flaming past,
I juggle the planets
as comets streak fast
Dipping my toe
in the milky way,
I play air hockey
with dwarfs all day
Asteroids rolling
and in rotating space,
a Goliath of rock
in peril we face
And far in the reaches
feeling heartbeats of life,
I look to the sky
to find forever tonight
Opening my eyes
and looking outside,
I wonder if dreams
really do come alive
— Seren, Oct 06, 2009
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Bosscombat
16 years 8 months ago
:)
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest Matty
paparazii
16 years 8 months ago
Sweet imagination
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Paparazii
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
You and that bloody dwarf
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Lyz
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest Jayne
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest Cat
Geezer
16 years 8 months ago
I get the feeling...
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Gee
Electric Blue
16 years 8 months ago
Haunted Dreams
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Heya Darlin
hushush8
16 years 8 months ago
re this
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Peter