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Haunted with Dreams

In Haunting night
falling into dream,
in softness a cloud
glowed at the seams

Bounced into rain
I was soaking up love,
rain brought blessings
and sings of the dove

Falling with stars
ash flaming past,
I juggle the planets
as comets streak fast

Dipping my toe
in the milky way,
I play air hockey
with dwarfs all day

Asteroids rolling
and in rotating space,
a Goliath of rock
in peril we face

And far in the reaches
feeling heartbeats of life,
I look to the sky
to find forever tonight

Opening my eyes
and looking outside,
I wonder if dreams
really do come alive

— Seren, Oct 06, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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Bosscombat

16 years 8 months ago

:)

yeh deerrr dreams come alive. once i dreamt i was gunna kick my toe real bad and i woke up walked to my bedroom door and opened the door hard onto my toe BAM dreams come true. anyway this is a brilliant poem as always! im gunna sit close 2morrow and hope some of that talent rubs off on me lol see ya in the daylight hours jayknee 2 bums 5 stars, 2 thumbs up, a smile and a coke. <3 ♣
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dearest Matty

If my dreams ... my real dreams lol come alive ? I am outta here lmao ... just joking ... thanks for the compliment ... hey you got more talent in your little finger than I got in my whole body ... I will slap you when you get here tomorrow night AND hide the bourbon lmao hahaha love you brother cya today I should say mwah love you Jay-Knee 2bums x x x x
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paparazii

16 years 8 months ago

Sweet imagination

I enjoyed this, but i doubt that this dream of yours, playing hockey in the air will ever come true, all in dreams, all in dreams we can make and create all the wonderful pleasure we yearn for. Hey, i liked this one, almsot drifted high. Thank you Paparazii
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Paparazii

Hopefully next time I will lift you a little higher .... this is all in my imagination and I know it wont come true but its nice to dream ... and peaceful ... thank you for your lovely compliment ... kind regards Jayne x x x
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

You and that bloody dwarf

He had better give you 5 stars every time he appears in your writes lol. Love this dream in space. It is a beauty this dream and I have enjoyed the dream with u, Excellent. I still miss your vampirella writes though. Love to u, Lyz. XX
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Lyz

LMAO I had to laugh at your comment cracked me up I am a bit silly its 2 am and I cant sleep been to bed and tried that but it wont work ... so I got up to have a look on here .... you take care and dream sweet dreams when you get there darlin ... love to you and yours all my love Jayne x x x x
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

Dearest Jayne

What a pleasant dream. I would hate to tell you about my dreams, they would make you shiver, for sure. I ate up every line of this piece, and they were yummy! So you take care "Jay Knee 2 Bums" and get the rest you need. Pleasant dreams... Love, Cat
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dearest Cat

This one was just a bit of fun ... thought I would write some positive stuff before I go away ... but I Vill be back LOL hahahaha Jay-knee two bums, wanna know the story to that ? I will tell you in PM tonight .. LMAO oh your gonna laugh your ass off Matty gave me the name one morning on his front verandah .... Btw I have No ass lmao Love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x x
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 8 months ago

I get the feeling...

that there are plenty of dwarves to play air-hockey with in real life. It sounds as though you live a life like Snow White, living with a bunch of dwarves. They have a band, and stay up drinking and playing all night while you keep the home-fires burning. Higgest of all bugs, with plenty of love. ~ Gee P.S. You don't have any ass because, you have laughed it all off, laughing at your dwarves.
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Gee

lmao you make it sound like I live in an enchanted forest and play with the unicorns and elves and faeries lol thats right I do(in my head) he he he he he love your comment made me roar laughing ... loved it thank you so much needed a good giggle tonight lol you take care and I just left a message on your new poem wonderful work !!! love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x x
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 8 months ago

Haunted Dreams

Jayne All I have are haunted dreams wishing that one day maybe one day they will come true........... I love the first verse the best. Always Electric Blue
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Heya Darlin

I didnt get an email for this one either just found it .... thanks for the read and the comment hun glad you liked it ... will be round reading later on and see if you have anything for us to read love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x x x
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hushush8

16 years 8 months ago

re this

an excellent write. the minimalist within me will not allow me to expound furthur. smile, peter
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Peter

well thank you for the read anyway mr Minimalist lol made me smile then LOL Take care and thanks for the visit ... loved your new one have just left a comment for you Love and hugz Jayne x x