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Aug 12, 2009
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Morning Mist
Its early morn just before dawn
mist lays low trees - black
shadows looming
far and wide
Flower heads heavy laden from
torrential rain weeping tears
fall flowers lay now
sleeping
Smells so fresh the morning dew
shines petals washed all anew
waiting for the mist to clear
as if it is the first day
it starts all over
again
Silence is broken by the
noise of the day
mist lays low trees - black
shadows looming
far and wide
Flower heads heavy laden from
torrential rain weeping tears
fall flowers lay now
sleeping
Smells so fresh the morning dew
shines petals washed all anew
waiting for the mist to clear
as if it is the first day
it starts all over
again
Silence is broken by the
noise of the day
— Electric Blue, Aug 12, 2009
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Sourav
16 years 9 months ago
It’s nice and true. Loved
Electric Blue
16 years 9 months ago
Morning Mist
ConcreteRose
16 years 9 months ago
Very Pretty
Electric Blue
16 years 9 months ago
morning mist
Electric Blue
16 years 9 months ago
Morning Mist
greeneyes
16 years 9 months ago
wow
Electric Blue
16 years 9 months ago
Morning Mist
themoonman
16 years 9 months ago
Maggie...
Electric Blue
16 years 9 months ago
Morning Mist
Seren
16 years 9 months ago
Dearest Maggie
Electric Blue
16 years 9 months ago
Morning mist
Janice Pearce
16 years 9 months ago
Morning Mist
Electric Blue
16 years 9 months ago
Morning Mist
Diatom Shells
16 years 9 months ago
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Electric Blue
16 years 9 months ago
Morning Mist
orgami
16 years 9 months ago
Fresh poem
orgami
16 years 9 months ago
Fresh poem