Sourav

Member since July 31, 2009

Member for 16 years, 10 months

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Lonely Verse

Posted Jul 16, 2010 · 10 lines · 1 critiques

All the things that broken and gone

All the emotions lying shattered

Resonate in my heart like a song

Leave a mark on my soul;

With remains of this broken field

Alone in this darkness again and again

I play with my innocence and my guilt

And create a world of my own.

Sourav’s timeline

July 2024
30 Tue

Anniversary
15 years of membership
July 2019
30 Tue

Anniversary
10 years of membership
July 2014
30 Wed

Anniversary
5 years of membership
July 2010
30 Fri

Anniversary
One year of membership
18 Sun

Received a critique
on Lonely Verse from @Lil Z
"I love the depth and feel of this one, it's a great write!"
16 Fri

Posted a poem
Lonely Verse
" All the things that broken and gone"
Open thread 10 lines
March 2010
13 Sat

Received a critique
on Rainy Night from @barbsdad2003
"An apt picture of despair. But (too often an unwelcome "but" follows to step on heels, doesn't it?) it seems you've painted the shell around the seed. And now I'd like to see the nut, the meat of it. And if there's a wa…"
February 2010
28 Sun

Received a critique
on Rainy Night from @Kailashana
"Trust me, it usually gets a whole lot verse before the worst is yet to come. Ummm.. I meant to write that. Keep on keeping on young master Sourav from India, remember Namaste is only a bow away. ~A "If parents really wo…"
28 Sun

Posted a poem
Rainy Night
" Desolate dark night Continual fall of rain,"
Open thread 19 lines
September 2009
16 Wed

Posted a poem
The Assassination
" Thoughts are haunted Shrouded by black sheet"
Open thread 31 lines
August 2009
01 Sat

First critique offered
on "Lasting Vision" by @Seren
July 2009
31 Fri

First publication
Monotony
30 Thu

Joined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.