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A Cat's Whiskers (Haiku)
arabesques of light
spouted through perforations
quiver quietly
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Leonard
Sat, 2011-07-09 07:47
A huge compliment
Thanks Lonnie
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author commentscribbler
Thu, 2011-07-07 23:11
hello
always like a visual Haiku like this one..............stan
Leonard
Sat, 2011-07-09 07:48
Thanks Stan
Glad you like it.
Leonard
Leonard Daranjo
"When the waiting stops, the living begins"
author commentBarbara Writes
Fri, 2011-07-08 01:46
nice haiku
Arabesques is the only word I haven't found in my laptop dictionary. can you tell me what it means?
other wise nice visual like Scrib says
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Leonard
Sat, 2011-07-09 07:51
Thank you Barbara
The meaning of "arabesque" according to the Oxford Concise Dictionary: An ornamental design consisting of intertwined flowing lines.
Best wishes ... Leonard
Leonard Daranjo
"When the waiting stops, the living begins"
author commentweirdelf
Fri, 2011-07-08 03:42
works well
a suggestion for the last line-
quiver in fey dust motes
cheers,
Jess
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Leonard
Sat, 2011-07-09 07:49
Thanks Jess
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"When the waiting stops, the living begins"
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