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Bard

"Bard"

Devotion of self-sacrifice,
And the humble artist's
Fervent beauty,
Tumble upon the canvas.
Like the Shaman's Spirit Wheel
Of eternal fire and ice,
Speaks of the forming of the world,
The creator's ardent hands
Shape wet clay
On the potter's wheel,
This natural simplicity
Shapes this poet's pen.

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Comments

First of all i've got to say you never fail to amaze me, then let me say where has the darkness gone?

great stuff

Lou

Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!

The darkness is in my closet, LOL! I'll tote some out next posting.

always, Cat

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author comment

Now that's how to explain creation of a poem, beautiful. you are definily "Miss Thing" you go girl with your bad self!

Eddie

LIFE ISN'T ABOUT WAITING FOR THE STORM TO PASS
IT'S ABOUT LEARNING HOW TO DANCE IN THE RAIN.
VIVIAN GREENE

but the pen must flow
from mind's ink
where will it ensue from,
do tell me ,
without an iota
of ceremony

loved

UNANSWERED
by accident
Cat ..
maybe..

loved

Yes, unanswered by accident. Sorry, I didn't see your comment sooner. I think we all strive to be artists and in our striving come desired results. As can be seen by your wonderous writings. Keep on writing, dear Loved poet and fine artist!

always, Cat

"The Book of Styx" can be ordered and purchased on line at:
http://eddystyx.mythramuse.com/

author comment

You are a great poet of today
I am only trying to cocoon out slowly
in my own inimitable way
hope someday
I may be able to pass your way
but time for that is not ripe yet today
You summon an artist in me
it's a signal praise
I hope to live up to your
high levels as you say levels as you say

loved

You are greatly appreciated by me and many others here. *hugs*

always, Cat

"The Book of Styx" can be ordered and purchased on line at:
http://eddystyx.mythramuse.com/

author comment

thanks with best wishes and regards to all
who love loved
huggggggggsssss 2222222 uuuuu alllllllllll

loved

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