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Nov 09, 2007
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Lies to children 3- death
S/he’s gone to sleep a long long time
S/he’s gone to a better place
S/he’s gone to burn in hell
S/he’s gone to come back to a better place
S/he’s gone.
We can remember
— weirdelf, Nov 09, 2007
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IKnowNoBox
18 years 8 months ago
I am going to go straight...
weirdelf
18 years 8 months ago
ta
Sinbadthesailorman
18 years 8 months ago
Not sure if S/He
weirdelf
18 years 8 months ago
She or he
orgami
18 years 8 months ago
fantastic poem
weirdelf
18 years 8 months ago
I take this praise with the highest regard
Barbara Writes
18 years 2 months ago
She is gone
weirdelf
18 years 2 months ago
Thanks Barbara, just covering a few of the bases
rider68
18 years 2 months ago
The Concept Will Rattle
Mark
18 years 2 months ago
The things said
Candlewitch
18 years 2 months ago
both interesting and unique.
weirdelf
18 years 2 months ago
Thanks, Peter, Mark, Cat
Mark
18 years 2 months ago
No biggy Jess
Nilmini
18 years 2 months ago
Differents ways to talk about Death
weirdelf
18 years 1 month ago
thanks for your deep consideration, Nilmini
RSScheerer
18 years 1 month ago
Lies to children
weirdelf
18 years 1 month ago
It's the best I can think of.
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