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Rid Myself of You
I've ripped off my skin
I can still feel your touch
I've bitten off my tongue
I can still taste you
I've poured acid in my eyes
I can still see you
I've busted my eardrums
I can still hear you
They say time heals all wounds
I call bullshit
Nothing can cleanse me
From your sins
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neopoet
Wed, 2024-02-14 00:40
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MermaidMaster
Tue, 2024-02-13 19:49
this poem hits hard- very
this poem hits hard- very well done.
<3
Kristen H.
Tue, 2024-02-13 20:18
Thank you...
very much, MM!
Candlewitch
Fri, 2024-02-16 04:28
dear K.H.
I do not know what to say... you put it right out there for all to see. Plain and simple and to the point. I always enjoy your poetry.
*hugs, Cat
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When someone reads your work
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And reply in kind, thanks.
Kristen H.
Fri, 2024-02-16 09:19
Thanks!
Sometimes you just have to say it like it is.