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Felicitations
From the tiny bug atop highest tree,
to mighty Blue Whales in the deepest sea,
and all living creatures nestled between,
some harbored before us, most never seen,
from lands furthest East, to vast distant West,
during wakened hours, replenishing rest --
may The World behold a cleansing rebirth
of unblemished love, and sweet Peace on Earth!
Style / type:
Free verse
Last few words:
I've felt close to many here on Neo. May you all be wonderfully blessed with abundant love and goodwill.
L
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Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Unca Fez
Wed, 2023-12-20 21:49
If Only It Would...
A beautiful thought, simply stated. If only it would come true. Although it is the basis for a number of religions, it seems that the message has gotten lost. Let us hope that we all start to remember it.
Thank you for this beautiful reminder of what we all should be striving for.
Thanx,
Steve
Lavender
Thu, 2023-12-21 18:22
Hello, Steve,
Thank you for reading. I hope you have a peaceful holiday season!
Best wishes!
L
Michael Anthony
Wed, 2023-12-20 22:46
Thank you for this L! Needed
Thank you for this L! Needed some brightness today, and I enjoyed this piece. Happy holidays to you and yours!
Best
Michael Anthony
Lavender
Thu, 2023-12-21 18:23
Hello, Michael!
Thank you for reading, and happy holidays to you and yours, too!
L
Ruby Lord
Thu, 2023-12-21 06:34
Hi Lavender, another perfect
Hi Lavender, another perfect poem. Every part of this flowed and your message is clear.
Peace on Earth, I wait for that day. I hope it comes soon. Ruby :) xx
Give and grow - let's raise our verses together. I'm happy to comment on your work and appreciate a comment on mine.
Lavender
Thu, 2023-12-21 18:26
Hello, Ruby,
I always appreciate your comments. You are so generous.
Happy Holidays to you, and best wishes for the New Year!
L
Candlewitch
Thu, 2023-12-21 09:09
This is just beautiful, sweet
This is just beautiful, sweet Lavender! thank you!
*love and good wishes, Cat
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Lavender
Thu, 2023-12-21 18:31
Hello, Cat,
Thought of you today, as it is Winter Solstice. Bring on the reborn Sun!
Thank you for reading, and warmest wishes for the New Year.
L
Candlewitch
Fri, 2023-12-22 06:50
Dearest Lavender,
although I cannot give the Solstice what I used to because of health, I still do it with love and candles. I celebrate the Yuletide. May you have a magical season!
*love, Cat
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RoseBlack
Thu, 2023-12-21 12:16
Beautiful
This should be everyone's hope and goal. Bring back compassion and love and human decency. There is so much ugly in the world and your poem reminds us that there is still good and good people left. Thank you.
~RoseBlack~
Lavender
Thu, 2023-12-21 18:33
Hello, Carrie,
I hope you have a beautiful holiday season, and a fantastic New Year!
Thank you, as always, for reading and sharing your wonderful thoughts.
L