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magics02
Member since November 8, 2009
Member for 16 years, 6 months
Tides Of Life
Where do I even start?
to pen my life story
so many tides of change
like sands of an unwavering dune
Longing to rekindle.
All that is now past.
of happier times and of love
As it was then, and is now
I retreat to the pangs.
of a silent broken heart
tearful eyes flow like a river.
Reaching for what used to be.
Where can I even start?
to pen the feeling in words
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deep reflections of thoughts
with no beginning and no end
Memento Mori, we live to die.
We die to live.
The tides of life
never to be the same
For the family I once had
Now they are gone.
Life will never be the same.
When was it ever?
Mona
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magics02’s timeline
- November 2024
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07 ThuAnniversary
15 years of membership
- February 2023
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27 MonReceived a critique
on Tides Of Life from @Patrick Terrence
"I'm a newbie to Neopoet, and am enjoying so many who write. This of yours today touches me to the quick and I am struck by your simplicity of line and language. I liked the lines "...thoughts / with no beginning and no…" -
27 MonReceived a critique
on Tides Of Life from @lovedly
"as you read my thousands of poems some have been read by over 11000 Do let me know which ones to publish here I posted 6 for many to read but some one snared no u can't post six so i deleted 5 now its up to u pubs want…" -
26 Sun
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25 Sat
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25 SatFirst contest commendation
Neopoem Of The Week February 19th to February 25th 2023
with the poem "Tides Of Life".
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23 Thu
- November 2019
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07 ThuAnniversary
10 years of membership
- November 2014
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07 FriAnniversary
5 years of membership
- June 2011
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05 SunCritique milestone
5,000 critiques given
- November 2010
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07 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- July 2010
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18 Sun
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15 Thu
- June 2010
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30 WedPosting milestone
100 poems posted
- May 2010
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15 SatHighest posting month
May 2010 — 17 poems
- April 2010
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29 Thu
- February 2010
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27 SatCritique milestone
1,000 critiques given
- November 2009
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08 SunFirst publication
REACH FOR YOUR DREAMS
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08 SunFirst critique offered
on "A Day In New York" by @paul
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07 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Just living and breathing
Spirit of Love
Location: USA - Florida, USA
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Recent Work
HAPPY VETERAN'S DAY
Veteran's Day
RUNNING AROUND
LONGING FOR PEACE
REACH FOR YOUR DREAMS
REACH FOR YOUR DREAMS
REACH FOR YOUR DREAMS
Contest Wins
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Workshops
| Skill level: | ||||
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Cliches and their use | (syllabus) | Olympic Pool | Started 2011-06-20 | Concluded |
| Olympic Pool (initial workshop) | (syllabus) | Olympic Pool | Started 2011-05-16 | Concluded |