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RUNNING AROUND

All I do is run around
Going no where, upside down
Push the button, wait for the door
It's always there more, more, more
Off to the elevator with papers in hand
My oh my isn't this grand
My feet are killing me, my back is a mess
When can I get back to my loving desk
It's a long work day 
With much to be done
And all I do is run, run, run
When will the whirling go away
I need to rest my feet today.

mms
— magics02, Nov 10, 2009

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Mrs Dalloway

16 years 6 months ago

Very cute. I think we all

Very cute. I think we all have days like that. I like the pace of your poem, it suits the theme.
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magics02

16 years 6 months ago

Thank you

Hello Mrs Dalloway and oh how nice your comment is. Love to chat sometime with you and I love your picture against the beautiful ocean. Be on tonight live stream and would love to share with you. Have a beautiful day Magic