magics02

Jul 15, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Dear Abby

Dear Ms Abby
Woke up feeling crabby
I write you this letter
in hopes I'll feel better

All your great advice
reading your section twice
Can you answer me now
I'll stop to take a bow

Where are you now lady
things are a little shady
who can we write to
that would listen like you

Oh dear Ms Abby
no longer feeling crabby
sent you a letter
Not feeling much better

Your column appeared
every day of the year
I write you this letter
in hopes I'll feel better

mms 7.15.10

— magics02, Jul 15, 2010

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Critiques

Lil Z

15 years 10 months ago

Brilliant!

What a great write, it's upbeat and entertaining, you've got what it takes and more to be a rapper!

magics02

15 years 10 months ago

Okay but a rapper!!

I lost my chatter.. LOL Love at ya lil z. Maybe I shall write a rapper song for thee:) Love at ya my guy Mona xoxoxo

hobo

15 years 10 months ago

Dear Miss "feeling crabby"

Dear Miss "feeling crabby" it seems to me that you need a little hobo in your life. a well intended little feller who is cute as a bug and very loveable. I think this would chase all your blues away. lol I know if she was still with us this is what she would say so I thought I would just help her a little with her comment :) *You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down*

magics02

15 years 10 months ago

Lol Hobo

You know I never wake up crappy or crabby unless I have not gotten enough sleep and then there is always coffee. Alarm goes off the house awakens and dear Ms Abby miss reading her stuff. Love at ya guy Mona xoxoxo

scribbler

15 years 10 months ago

abby

First time I read it I came up with 3 changes.Then realized they wouldn't improve,just make it sound more like something I wrote LOL.cute write on motive.....scribbler

magics02

15 years 10 months ago

Offer up your thougths my Scribler

Thanks for the stop over and yes I would love to hear what you have to say as I always enjoy all the comments. See you on the flipside soon Love at ya guy and hugs too Mona xoxoxo

Candlewitch

15 years 10 months ago

Dear Mona

This is very amusing in your very own style. Love, Cat

magics02

15 years 10 months ago

Thanks Golden Charm Lady

Yeah Cat just felt like doing a little twist on it this morning before work and I thank you for the stop over and read you soon gal Love You Mona xoxox

Kailashana

15 years 10 months ago

Common sense.I wonder how

Common sense. I wonder how many lives she saved over the years, how many folks did and said what they knew they knew needed to said and done and just needed one person's validation. As mentioned in all previous replies, your own *motivational* style works quite well I see. Light, Anna "There is a kind of mysticism to writing." ~ Irvine Welsh

magics02

15 years 10 months ago

Thank you Kaily

for stopping by and yes when I was much younger and unwise:) I counted on those reads and loved to read them..I liked the questions, some were off the chain but her answers seemed to be all on spot, lol Hmmm... got me thinking maybe I should have an article in the paper every week called... Dear Magics...Lol thanks for the visit and yes all in light and peace..Mona xoxo

shirley harrison

15 years 10 months ago

Dear Mona

heartfull fun, Lovely to have some fun poetry! Abby i was wondering if you had written about the westminster! L:O:L much love shirl.... shirley harrison

magics02

15 years 10 months ago

That was a good one Shirls

You always manage to make me smile and laugh,love ya for it and I just mentioned maybe I should have a little spot in the paper called..Dear Magics..LMAO Love at ya bella Mona xoxox

Seren

15 years 10 months ago

Dear Mona

Its all been said before me and all the good words are used up lol sorry hun I am out of words tonight I plant some stars instead love and big hugs my friend JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)

magics02

15 years 10 months ago

You are never out of words my aussie lady

I thank you always for your support with my writes and your words Seren. Hope your doing fine now and love at ya my dear friend\ Mona xoxox

magics02

15 years 10 months ago

double post

must be hitting the enter button too fast again

faithmairee

15 years 10 months ago

Charming poem

Dear Mona-I used to love to read her myself. Five stars for the pure charm of this piece! I love it! Love-Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~

magics02

15 years 10 months ago

I thank you lovely lady

For your visit and comments as always. Love and hugs Mona xoxoxo

Nordic cloud

15 years 10 months ago

This is great fun dear magic Mona

Ann of Norway You woke up and did a little dance with your thoughts and it was such a fascinating little dance with this Ms Abby, I enjoyed it a lot. "had me reading them twice" ..not sure what THEM is here? It? "I’ll stop and take a bow" ......I'll stop take a bow.... wonder if the AND could go? The hesitation we shall make when reading it! "who can we write too".....to! "What about Now feeling much better......"Not feeling much better" Yes loved this Mona love to you from Ann XXOO

magics02

15 years 10 months ago

Dear Ann

Thank you so much for the comments you always help with your suggests and I do appreciate them alot. I went in this morning and used your excellent advice just like Abby would and let me know how it reads to you now. Hope this message finds you on the mend and know I am thinking of you dearly Forever in my heart Love to you Mona xoxoxox

xena465

15 years 10 months ago

Nice one Mona

Like Shirley said, a good fun poem. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

magics02

15 years 10 months ago

Thank you Xena

For your visit once again and yes I did have fun doing this one. Hope all is well by you and be bye to visit you soon my friend. Been spending alot of time on here and letting everything else go, I guess that is what we call the Neopoet addiction LOL and it sure seems that way for me. It is like my extended family who I visit everyday. It is also all I have learned from each and every poet that I have had to oppurtunity to meet only because of this site made it possible. I am forever grateful, Love to you and hugs too Xena lady Mona xooxoxo

Loreli

15 years 10 months ago

Very fun to read!

I used to read her all the time also....I found this very enjoyable! Made me smile on a "crabby" morning! Lori