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Kimathi
Member since November 1, 2012
Member for 13 years, 8 months
A New Life
We thought that moving to a place
with springs, grass-field and butterflies
would make it better for us, but it was all vanity;
like in the city when we were complaining about overdue bills,
traffic, noise and lack of privacy,
we are now polluting this serene place
with our petty fights.
If it is possible to move to heaven right now,
I think God would kick us back to this blue ball……..
Honey, I think it’s time that we change our attitude
towards each other, and rekindle our passionate love,
rather than moving from one place to another.
Source: A New Life - Change Poems, Life Poems, True Love Poems http://www.poemsclub.com/a-new-life.html#ixzz2hrpyB4Aa
Kimathi’s timeline
- November 2022
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01 TueAnniversary
10 years of membership
- November 2017
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01 WedAnniversary
5 years of membership
- November 2013
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05 TueReceived a critique
on A New Life from @wesley snow
"I have read more positive poems today than all month previous." -
05 TueReceived a critique
on A New Life from @mand
"I like the message and simplicity of this one! Its honest, concise, clear and easy to understand - which is what is appealing about it. Well done. Love Mand xxx" -
01 FriAnniversary
One year of membership
- October 2013
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16 Wed
- November 2012
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13 TueReceived a critique
on Being part of Mama Africa...... from @Ian.T
"You have all the makings in this one again to make a good poem, Jess has indicated well what is needed, so lets just take one Stanza:- I feel texture of the ground with my bare legs, as I go to hunt an unsuspecting ante…" -
12 Mon
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05 Mon
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01 ThuFirst publication
Let go.....
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01 ThuJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
I am a free-spirited person who appreciates Mother Earth and people around me. It is by words that we interpret our world as it is, and as it ought to be. We also describe the world that is deep within our soul. I also have a poem, "Poem without words", published in Shot Glass Journal by Muse-Pie Press, in Issue 11.
Location: Kenya, KEN
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