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No More Poems
I stand tall
with you all
now exhausted
by age
may not post anymore poetry
but shall read the ones
who wish me
It is a long way to wilderness
to eternity
when I will be bound on that plane
no one can say
But till then a faithful NEO
I will stay
till forgotten
as comes long a newer
younger generation
My love to the bearers of the future
of renowned poets to be Neo's creation
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Chiori
Sat, 2021-04-24 08:19
Nice one lovedly So touching
Nice one lovedly
So touching
always remember to make a critique of other poems
using the hoe is not madness for nothing
Candlewitch
Sat, 2021-04-24 09:49
you are precious to us
please don't tell us that you won't write anymore poetry... your poems have been known to inspire many of neo poets. you make us all better!
*hugs, Cat
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When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
lovedly
Sat, 2021-04-24 11:10
Kindness CW
Will read as and when
compose when tears flow
and emotion
showers confusion
then my mind may spark again
before the final sunset
Grant me that thanks
lovedly
Sat, 2021-04-24 17:00
OK PROMISES BROKEN
When eyes thirst
to be the first
to be read
I read
else the poet who is unread feels the heat
why not me
a free -style
free time poet that I be
what else can you expect of me
but simple poetry
At times I feel funny
reading some poems
which have no cup
but they feel like having
cups of tea or coffee
I have empathy
have you no sympathy
O poets be simple
helpful like me
Geezer
Sun, 2021-04-25 08:57
You will never...
be done until you are done! Your muse is just tired and needs to refresh herself. Go walk on the beach, drink some wine and look at pretty women! That will surely help! ~ Geez.
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There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lovedly
Sun, 2021-04-25 12:02
only you know me well
the GEEZZZZZZZ
Thanks I need to refresh my eyes
else you will hear
many have dried red eyes
no surprise
my muse
ought to come alive
send some red wine
then come with me to dine
in some deep golden mine
lol
c lynn brooks
Sun, 2021-04-25 15:39
lovedly
Stay with us with your postings. Perhaps not as often, but do let us know you are there.
Chrys
check out our chat room open to all 24/7
lovedly
Sun, 2021-04-25 20:51
sure enough Lynn
I may live 100 years
I died once for 5 minutes
and
no one can die twice
I will be an exception
will continue as and when
hopefully
no other work to do
but serve NEO