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Let Your Heart Beat
Let your heart beat
as long as it does as its assignment
yes we have only one life to live
let's live
a life happily
as young age is one full of passion
be positive let your mind dictate
the waves of happiness
that both mind and heart need to take
both are totally independent
have intellectual 'minds' of their own
brain only depends for blood
the heart pumps
and the heart pumps
till permits the sun
so don't from life run
we come here but once
have a heart o son
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Geezer
Sun, 2021-03-21 15:42
In your...
usual convoluted style, you have hit the mark. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
Sun, 2021-03-21 16:29
convoluted style, you have hit the mark which good or bad Gee
intricate.
labyrinthine.
perplexing.
puzzling.
tangled.
tortuous.
elaborate.
involved.
Geezer
Mon, 2021-03-22 09:10
All...
of the above, but good! LoL
~ Geez.
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lovedly
Mon, 2021-03-22 11:37
thankness
lol Gee l
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