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Let Your Heart Beat

Let your heart beat
as long as it does as its assignment
yes we have only one life to live
let's live
a life happily

as young age is one full of passion
be positive let your mind dictate
the waves of happiness
that both mind and heart need to take

both are totally independent
have intellectual 'minds' of their own

brain only depends for blood
the heart pumps
and the heart pumps
till permits the sun
so don't from life run
we come here but once
have a heart o son

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

usual convoluted style, you have hit the mark. ~ Geez.
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intricate.
labyrinthine.
perplexing.
puzzling.
tangled.
tortuous.
elaborate.
involved.

author comment

of the above, but good! LoL
~ Geez.
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It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

lol Gee l
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