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Dreamer Me
I'm always dreaming
every one here is reading
who
not me
but pushing down the stream
oldie me
all sansy
who will now take fancy
but
I await Gee
at times Stanly
casually drops in Ian
O what an IRONY
none is now reading me
How will I come first in Augustly poem
OUT of this WORLD
new one none read me
Judge will do hopefully
not fake me
of my cup poemey this
where is Ma'am
Gracy
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
AN INEXTINGUISHABLE POET
YES 'TIS
me
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Lavender
Fri, 2020-08-28 21:02
Dreamer Me
Hi, Lovedly,
A very playful piece, I believe. Most of your poetry has several thoughts interconnecting, as does this one, it seems. Sansy guy, huh? I've learned a new word today, and I'm tickled that it rhymes with fancy.
Thank you!
L
lovedly
Fri, 2020-08-28 22:01
Sansy
how would you match it with
sexy
lol
lavy
Geezer
Sat, 2020-08-29 07:43
You have...
too much on your mind lovedly. ~ Gee.
.
There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
lovedly
Sat, 2020-08-29 12:22
lol
Gee
as always
Pataphysique.C
Mon, 2020-09-21 01:31
Your poems
are always unique, with a kind of Steinesque running commentary, something of your own. I always know when looking up this great website that I am going to find something "you", rather than the product of chatroom, workshop groupthink.
lovedly
Mon, 2020-09-21 01:41
thanks for the drive in shall read u tooo
Steinesque running commentary meaning
pardonae my ignorancey
Pataphysique.C
Mon, 2020-09-21 13:29
Gertrude
Stein
lovedly
Mon, 2020-09-21 13:47
hardly a name
for a hardened male lol
Pataphysique.C
Mon, 2020-09-21 14:29
Yeah
BUT YOU'RE INEXTINGUISABLE TI MSE
lovedly
Mon, 2020-09-21 16:15
INEXTINGUISABLE TI MSE
i c
thanksee
Pataphysique.C
Tue, 2020-09-22 18:28
Hahah
lol