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Dreamer Me

I'm always dreaming

every one here is reading

who
not me

but pushing down the stream
oldie me
all sansy

who will now take fancy
but
I await Gee
at times Stanly
casually drops in Ian
O what an IRONY
none is now reading me

How will I come first in Augustly poem

OUT of this WORLD

new one none read me
Judge will do hopefully
not fake me

of my cup poemey this
where is Ma'am
Gracy

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
AN INEXTINGUISHABLE POET YES 'TIS me
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

Comments

Hi, Lovedly,
A very playful piece, I believe. Most of your poetry has several thoughts interconnecting, as does this one, it seems. Sansy guy, huh? I've learned a new word today, and I'm tickled that it rhymes with fancy.
Thank you!
L

how would you match it with
sexy
lol
lavy

author comment

too much on your mind lovedly. ~ Gee.
.

There is value to commenting and critique, tell us how you feel about our work.
This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.

Gee
as always

author comment

are always unique, with a kind of Steinesque running commentary, something of your own. I always know when looking up this great website that I am going to find something "you", rather than the product of chatroom, workshop groupthink.

Steinesque running commentary meaning

pardonae my ignorancey

author comment

Stein

for a hardened male lol

author comment

BUT YOU'RE INEXTINGUISABLE TI MSE

i c
thanksee

author comment

lol

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