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Are you He/She
One who doesn't sin lives honorably
also shares knowledge with all human
donates all excess wealth amongst needy
He/She will be the next one from Heaven
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Sparrow 42
Tue, 2019-10-29 04:32
Loved
This needs a good edit there seems to be some words missing as it doesn't flow.
The odd capital letter K but please sort it as it is not up to your usual writes,
Yours Ian ..
Words can build a nation
lovedly
Tue, 2019-10-29 11:08
ANY better
Ian now are you in Q
Sparrow 42
Tue, 2019-10-29 19:28
Loved
(st needy) just a missed couple of letters that you will find on your Key board lol
Take care know I is watching lol
Yours, Ian ..
Words can build a nation
lovedly
Tue, 2019-10-29 19:38
amongst
amongst
not accepted by compy says
among-st
OR
among
lol keep watching
till I
rflol
so FINALLY AM USING
SEE
Sparrow 42
Wed, 2019-10-30 19:27
Loved
I c u is a mused does this mean you will write better in the future with their help..
Take care, Yours, Yenti
Words can build a nation
lovedly
Wed, 2019-10-30 21:14
a mused
OR
amused
which Ian
u rn't hoppy
ICU