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Are you He/She

One who doesn't sin lives honorably

also shares knowledge with all human

donates all excess wealth amongst needy

He/She will be the next one from Heaven

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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This needs a good edit there seems to be some words missing as it doesn't flow.
The odd capital letter K but please sort it as it is not up to your usual writes,
Yours Ian ..

Words can build a nation

Ian now are you in Q

author comment

(st needy) just a missed couple of letters that you will find on your Key board lol
Take care know I is watching lol
Yours, Ian ..

Words can build a nation

amongst
not accepted by compy says
among-st
OR
among
lol keep watching
till I
rflol

so FINALLY AM USING
SEE

author comment

I c u is a mused does this mean you will write better in the future with their help..
Take care, Yours, Yenti

Words can build a nation

OR
amused

which Ian
u rn't hoppy
ICU

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