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My Romanian! Lover
I once fell in a momentary love
with a Romanian girl,
she was so sweet
just a teen
and
her doggy was lovelier
than was she
I posted this poetry
across the Internet,
‘twas lovely
she did not know it
Likewise I compose
and post
some read me
others dispose
the garbage bin of time is vast
all finally become poetic compost
some are inspired to use
as poetic manure,
such off springs of poetry
we all have to endure
so a Romanian girl is loved,
by one and all.
(All my true poems are loved by all)
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Geezer
Fri, 2018-08-17 14:34
Ya mean...
your true stories are the best liked of all? I would say that is quite a compliment to your life. I guess when you are gone from this plane, you won't have anything to complain about.~ Geezer.
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lovedly
Fri, 2018-08-17 16:41
one life only
live it faithfully and truly
as pain can be felt by one only
the wearer only alone knows
where the shoe pinches
Thanks Gee
you have been always been nice
when in Hospy in waiting 3 hours
I read an article by a LEADING DOC
Praise everyone
accept their kicks with a smile
it's their folly
why let them feel shy
and
that's what I have been doing all along
and
now you know why
u 2 will