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My Romanian! Lover

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2018-08-17 00:00

I once fell in a momentary love
with a Romanian girl,
she was so sweet
just a teen

and

her doggy was lovelier
than was she

I posted this poetry
across the Internet,
‘twas lovely
she did not know it

Likewise I compose
and post
some read me
others dispose

the garbage bin of time is vast
all finally become poetic compost
some are inspired to use
as poetic manure,
such off springs of poetry
we all have to endure
so a Romanian girl is loved,
by one and all.

(All my true poems are loved by all)

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Geezer

Fri, 2018-08-17 14:34

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your true stories are the best liked of all? I would say that is quite a compliment to your life. I guess when you are gone from this plane, you won't have anything to complain about.~ Geezer.
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lovedly

Fri, 2018-08-17 16:41

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live it faithfully and truly
as pain can be felt by one only
the wearer only alone knows
where the shoe pinches
Thanks Gee

you have been always been nice

when in Hospy in waiting 3 hours
I read an article by a LEADING DOC

Praise everyone
accept their kicks with a smile
it's their folly
why let them feel shy

and
that's what I have been doing all along
and
now you know why

u 2 will

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