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Is love really blind
Teenager falls in love with a senile one
all hearts throb and the minds sing,
Each one has one’s own melody,
some hilarious
others moody
Our inhales and exhales
now can never match
but we feel intensity!!!
are we a mismatch
just tell me
She is a teen
but I far from anyone’s desire
now to be seen
why does she love a decaying tree
someone simply console me
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
IRiz
Sat, 2018-01-20 22:48
Mysterious poem. I like it.
Mysterious poem.
I like it.
IRiz
lovedly
Sun, 2018-01-21 09:42
you may re read and see
where in reality lies the seed
mystery will be revealed
you will know it
indeed
IRiz
Sun, 2018-01-21 11:25
Sweet.
Sweet.
IRiz
Ja Ja
Sun, 2018-01-21 09:31
is love really blind
It is blind
It is kind
It is mind
Enjoy it fully while it is there. Thank you kindly
mary lababidi
Sun, 2018-01-21 12:01
Lovely!:)
Lovely!:)
Chiori
Mon, 2018-01-22 02:48
in that case it is blind
in that case it is blind
always remember to make a critique of other poems
using the hoe is not madness for nothing
lovedly
Mon, 2018-01-22 08:24
using the hoe is not madness for nothing
please clarify your content
it is unclear to me
Thanks