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Is love really blind

Teenager falls in love with a senile one
all hearts throb and the minds sing,

Each one has one’s own melody,
some hilarious
others moody

Our inhales and exhales
now can never match
but we feel intensity!!!
are we a mismatch
just tell me

She is a teen
but I far from anyone’s desire
now to be seen
why does she love a decaying tree
someone simply console me

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 


Mysterious poem.
I like it.


where in reality lies the seed
mystery will be revealed
you will know it

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It is blind
It is kind
It is mind

Enjoy it fully while it is there. Thank you kindly


in that case it is blind

always remember to make a critique of other poems
using the hoe is not madness for nothing

please clarify your content
it is unclear to me

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