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waiting to smile with you
waiting to smile with you
Smiler's follow me
nice smile yours ....
people must be on all fours..
my salutations...
I love all smilers...
you are added on..
Smile is the elixir of life...
that oils the rusted mind...
and
we all then move along....
happily in smiles...
so smile along with me...
as we all walk the poetic mile....
kindly smile all the while...
all you young ones out there
in poetic glare
all young ones
smiles with me do share...
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
alidzain
Sun, 2015-06-28 16:25
loved
I'll give you more than that. A smile and laughter.
A smile can still be sad
or mocking
it can be mistaken as mad
when its never ending
same goes for laughter
too little, its a joyless life
too much, I'll wonder
if its real or a lie.
Add friendship and its alright
it becomes a beautiful bonding
in a ray of light.
so for you, I'm smiling
and laughing
as I say
thank you for sharing
Alid
lovedly
Mon, 2015-06-29 00:30
kindness
Cancerians r negative try and b more positive
thanks alids
alidzain
Mon, 2015-06-29 08:54
loved
Cancerians r negative try and b more positive?
I don't know what you are trying to say. I don't believe the stars have anything to do with people's way of thinking. I'm just writing what I see as truth about smiles and laughter. It's what many people think. lol
Alid
lovedly
Mon, 2015-06-29 09:37
glad ur
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Sparrow
Mon, 2015-06-29 14:24
Loved
A beaming is coming on, go for it Bard, now you must get out more, or that mirror will crack,
Yours, Ian..
.
Give critique to help keep Neopoet great.
Unconditional love to you all.
"Learn to love yourself first"
Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti
lovedly
Mon, 2015-06-29 15:46
ok thankx
ok fine