Bosscombat

Member since March 24, 2009

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Telekinetic Torment

Posted Jan 4, 2015 · 14 lines · 2 critiques

With a click off thumb and middle,
Skin Separates from skin,
Suspended in space and time,
Equal sections, spread equal distance.
There are radiant green shards of light and energy,
Echoing and surging through the gaping hollows.
Atoms divide and become rival.
Chromosomes sever and revolt.
The human fabric is exposed and scrutinised.
...euphoria.
Then with blunt, undisguised melody,
Another thunderous snap,
And the peices jolt back into slumped composition,
And all that remains is agony.

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March 2024
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Anniversary
15 years of membership
March 2019
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10 years of membership
January 2015
13 Tue

Received a critique
on Telekinetic Torment from @judyanne
"I'm intrigued I interpret this as that opening of the soul when one meditates to near understanding, and that jolt back into the now because the mind find it too vast to grasp, with the resulting disappointment and feel…"
05 Mon

Received a critique
on Telekinetic Torment from @Esker
"like this descript....and i see how the use of puncturation makes the read more fall into its pace.. thinking of the movie The Howling and the surf sixties song No werewolves.... thank you"
04 Sun

Posted a poem
Telekinetic Torment
"With a click off thumb and middle,"
Open thread 14 lines
03 Sat

Received a critique
on Complex Texture from @Esker
"beer an coolaid with a bucket of chicken hyenas at least with wings one can wing off with morsels or this could be the news at night.. my peanut butter and jam gotta fuel up in case something comes up at night. drop the…"
03 Sat

Posted a poem
Complex Texture
"I hear the sound of crumbling bone"
Open thread 9 lines
March 2014
23 Sun

Anniversary
5 years of membership
April 2010
15 Thu

Posted a poem
Music soothes...
"Each day I wake up"
Open thread 28 lines
March 2010
23 Tue

Anniversary
One year of membership
April 2009
15 Wed

Highest posting month
April 2009 — 14 poems
11 Sat

Most-discussed work
Writers block

22 critiques to date.
March 2009
26 Thu

First critique offered
on "One Moment" by @Seren
24 Tue

First publication
A Poker Face
23 Mon

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.