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Angel
Member since June 24, 2019
Member for 6 years, 11 months
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Momma
Im worried about you
your acting really new
you never were the same
I think were the ones to blame
Your health is a secret
that's not how it should be
your the only one to keep it
you should at least tell me
I can see we stress you out
when you get mad and start to shout
yes, I know it when I see it
and the look on your face does fit
im mad, sad, worried about you
what your feeling, I don't have a clue
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I want to know your feelings
to be more open
lighten the load off your chest
trust me , ill be here for the rest
you are the best
this is not a test
Angel’s timeline
- June 2024
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24 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- June 2020
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24 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- June 2019
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24 MonFirst critique offered
on "Complicated Relationship" by @tyro
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24 Mon
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24 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
- February 2008
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05 TueReceived a critique
on all sad and alone from @poewriter58
"The concept of the poem is not uncommon loss and loneliness but your words could have been though out better to many cliche's also please use stanzas or doublets ( two line segments) makes your work easier to read and l…" -
01 FriFirst publication
all sad and alone
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01 FriPosted a poem
all sad and alone
"when you're gone my world will drop and time will stop.angels cry over your soul when it time for you to go. i wouder why you had to leave me all sad and alone.im still woundering when you going to come home.im felling so sad and alone.baby please come back home where you belong so i wont be all sad and alone.one last cry befor my day dies.i can't do nothing now but sit here and cry woundering why my life had to drop down and die.i dont know why i feel this why but let shair one last cry befor our day die"
About Me
About me
im African American im 14 and I love doing poets and writing and I know its my passion
Location: SC
Favorite Poets
Langston Hughes
Gwendolyn Brooks
Maya Angelou
2pac
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Workshops
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| Poets first poems | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2017-06-23 | Concluded |