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The Young Republican

Submitted by chevyvent on Wed, 2016-11-09 20:52

The Young Republican

He searches through the morning news reading papers nothing new
Out of his sadness springs a mere madness
Shattered dream flaunt the scene shallow promises some make believe
Yet out of his silence springs forth a word to the wise

Love from above in the setting sun spring forth from above
Shelter lies dormant amidst it's beckoning plow
The young republican shall shine in a world in a bind
With the new news we celebrate the victory of the Trump

He walks with his head up through shallow dreams in his heart
He will light the flame that ignited the spark to what he was waiting for
A clean cut type of fella traveling forth through Washington D.C.
A heart full of love set on the national scene

A companion for him to watch where his feet travel in
The idea of a wall in Mexico come fluttering his mind
He campaigns with his promises filled with both grace & truth
He will discover a new way in which to bow the knee to pray

The young republican will soon discover
There are treasures in which to explore with your fellow brother
A smile on his face from a little baby will embrace
Looks deep through the aura of the common man hopefully you will understand ?

© Mario Vitale 2016 . All Rights Reserved.

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Editing stage: 
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Candlewitch

Tue, 2016-11-15 12:02

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you must not have listened/watched the debates of Trump/Clinton! Trump is none of those things with which you attribute him with. he disrespects women and makes fun of the handicapped:( it is well documented. don't take my word for it, look it up!!! may the powers that be save us FROM Trump!

http://www.marieclaire.co.uk/entertainment/people/donald-trump-quotes-57213

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chevyvent

Thu, 2016-11-17 20:47

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I feel being an American we are given freedoms that will demonstrate our right to free speech
With my newest poem Young Republican I sought to demonstrate the party in a favorable light
People are entitled to their opinion of the piece it doesn't mean I have to agree with them.
It's my right to post what I please along as it doesn't hurt anybody.

Mario Vitale

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Candlewitch

Sat, 2016-11-19 11:31

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I agree with your right to disagree ;) have a lovely weekend!

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