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This is the wurst poem ever writ
it has no rhyme, the meter's [email protected] t
well maybe it has one lone rhyme
but it's hardly worth your time

I don't know what the intent is
message as clear as soda fizz
mizpelling and tipos by the duzzen
as purty as an old maid cuzzin

You can relax I'm almost finished
is there such a word as ginnished ?
go on back to having fun
this monstrosity is finally done

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Structured: Western
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Was it wurst you slake my thirst,
for sudden bouts of fun,
you have just begun to turn the knob
and out it comes with buttons on;
scidding fizzibles out of ears
slicing wizicles out of some,
where's the gun, I've ginnished!

:) Ann in the clouds.

"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.

just a little thing for fun. Glad you enjoyed.......scribbler

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I don't think any here were ever that bad lol. glad you came by..........scribbler

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You come up with some brilliant ideas Stan! and yet again - I'm pleased to say - I'm giggling and laughing, a great start to a Thursday morning!

Thanks Stan the Man

Love Mand xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

just a rerun from my old blog. Glad it gave you a chuckle.........stan

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Alas , If that's all you can find wrong with this, your career as a critic is doomed LMAO. It seems that everybody has enjoyed this oldie but moldy. Thanks for suggestions but rekkon I'll leeve it ass iss..........skribblur

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Hey Rosy...glad you liked it.......stan

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i lake yaar sence

oh humor
it s laike a tumor

uuuuraye greateter poeter

that me taught twas i
the honly one
its so

now am i dunn


just another poem of mine before editing lol.Tanks four the vizit......skriblur

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ginnished? - ful ov gin ov corse.....

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

Guess we need to alert Webster's to invention of a new word lol........stan

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