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The world through a hula hoop.

One must also say
time changes
every moment
that alone is what is known
as the only constant

no change

it's just a moment
to moment
a' la momentary

then virtual immemorial
an imagination
will be
next moment casually

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Free verse
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I might consider shifting the accents in the first line to-
One must also say
Hear it? As opposed to opening DAH DAH dah, you open iambic, Dah da. Fits with the pace of the rest of the stanza.
"no change"? meaning doesn't change? a bit Reggie like "no woman, no cry" I don;'t think that works.
à la, not ala, for french.

i like the last line falling off like a limp. I like the poem. Not the title so much. In these types of poems, you can give the poem a crazy Dali like title too, something just crazy and fun. "The world through a hula hoop." etc.

I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings

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