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Who!

Submitted by loved on Thu, 2012-03-15 22:48

Simply superbly intellectual
I drift in the knowledge
of being a part of a
(Non) spiritual beauty
that is endless and races
with unconditional love.

I am that lonely bird
As there I am free really,
of all people
as I have learned to write
Even with the bard standing
at my side.

Just trust me,
I believe in myself.
The anonymity I don,
is not optional,
It is adorned as a diamond,
a Kohinoor perhaps
like it’s only exceptional.

I’m not scared of evil or death
nor those who scold
as if they were after
my blessed soul,
I consider them
as beings of smaller fortune
who need to be laid to rest,
for once they come to know
who really I am
they will fuck themselves...

Have faith in my works,
I’m a creature of creativity
I don't at all doubt
my very own ability,
but like all humans
down to earth,
seek blessings of wonderful souls
here in Neopoet,
like you are since birth.

You all are a friends,
philosophers and guides
how can Loved,
ever from you dare hide!

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Ian.T

Fri, 2012-03-16 12:06

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Writing the words that talk to all, then they turn and say not ME to themselves.
Tary not young bard in the land of obscurity there is only desperation lurking to take your hand then your soul.
Become one with all, write to them of things that hold their eyes then their hearts without pain.
Draw them pictures they will only see not something that you and me would love for always.
They sometimes will pass us over, I know you will say it is their loss, but catch them as you would a butterfly swift and strong, or beguile them into a web that holds them fast, use the words that are BIG a title that draws their eyes..
Fear not young Bard, I have eternity, time is on our side, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

loved

Fri, 2012-03-16 13:56

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You marvel with words

As I juggle with them
Yet in the short expanse of time
at our disposal,
let the world gape aghast
at what we mean
after all tis their ignorance,
not our loss
for we mean well for all over here
its left for them to endear,
time is running out for the vociferous ones,
when found out, then they alone
will appear as dunce.
No aspersions I cast at anyone
life is a puzzle and to enjoy it
let’s have more fun
Bard prays and prays again,
let the dwarfs, dwarfs remain

loved

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Candlewitch

Sat, 2012-03-17 13:35

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I really loved this one!

Just trust me,
I believe in myself.
The anonymity I don,
is not optional,
It is adorned as a diamond,
a Kohinoor perhaps
like it’s only exceptional.

wonderful!

always, Cat

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And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.

loved

Sat, 2012-03-17 13:59

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in your quick reciprocation
I have decided to read more
and comment ,
rather than create more
and
posts left unread
It saddens a poet to know
one is being pushed back....
unread

loved

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Ian.T

Sat, 2012-03-17 14:13

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You are read by quite a few it is just that they don't know what to say, Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

loved

Sat, 2012-03-17 23:21

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to continue and I will
Thanks Ian

loved

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loved

Fri, 2012-08-31 13:16

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angelic messengers
from heaven
and
now I believe there is one

beyond the beyond ...
where beyond does stand bare ,
none know of yet
in stupendous folly stare,
we are not beyond despair!

loved

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