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which guy can

Which guy can
estrogen make
without balls,
do say
Adrenalin still flows my way
I have lost all counts
so do not dismay
life now slowly
but gradually ebbs away
you are not alone
going out of your way
sans all
so for a while longer do stay
time's journey is not yet out
that I can say
show your entire pathway
as Neopoets ask you to linger
if you may
we all look at you
without your saying look at me
what will Neo
without you be?
Cheers, we all will miss
as much as you
still cursing continue
my legs are firm on the ground
never will the ilk of my kind
ever be found
with legs upwards
as you always appear to sound...
come be level with mother earth
we all from the same soil
have taken birth
where is the mirth!

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Free verse
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inspired by all balls

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With just a little magic touch here and there this will be the best of your writes for a while, loved it
Young Bard you are now reaching out for the things that you should have had in your hands a long time ago,
Yours Ian.T (I have to go)

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

here and where is there?
a bit here
and a bit there
a bit everywhere

who can ever dare
to compare
so poets take care Neopoets are
so do be aware

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modified but the compy has electrified
and made it seem like WS's soliloquy

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