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Warfare

Very true
In war
none is ever killed by a bullet
as all fire in the darkness
only shells wound.....
snipers are not worth their salt
if they don't kill
one for one,
may be injure another
with the same single bullet
Ricocheted
I am thus.....
each poem of mine
must touch the heart
in such a manner
that tears must flow
else, my poetry ought to blow

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Free verse
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each poem of mine
must touch the heart
in such a manner
that tears must flow
else, my poetry ought to blow

I feel about poetry as you do. This is my wish too.

always, Cat

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but I have yet to attain
that state or stage.
Thanks

loved

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