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trance dance in France

when I compose
I go into a trance

as if I'm in Paris
in France

or going around in romance
yes prance

as I poetically dance

obscure to the world around
I am to be spectacularly found

NOT to any law bound!
poetry is emotional display
we play
our own way

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Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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a little play with some rhyme I see.

I wish I could rhyme well,
but most of the time its's hell
to keep it going for me
that's why I envy you, see?

When I compose
I hope its not prose
Hate to irritate Mr Wes
want to give my best

I fly into wonderland
where elves wander hand in hand
and fairies danced in the night
their motion filled with delight

I plunged into darkness
to see its many faces
and form a balance in my write
of shadows and glory light

Now this little poem I offer
doesn't make me a rhyme master
just a practing student
learning from you for self-betterment.


like laying on the couch
enjoying music

lovely alidz

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glad you liked it.


future chair

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glance, instance, hesitance, cadence and a few others lol. But seriously a fun read............stan

without pants on naturally stan
ur a man
u ought to know
pun intended

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