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Today there's a burning fire...within me

Today there is a burning fire within me
to compose a newer kind of poetry
that ignites infallible minds of humanity

such a kind of poetry
where two beloveds
face one another

as one smiles
balloons of kisses fly
crowds in great abandon....
hide behind a veil of time

no clouds are needed
all want an audience blind

so be it my way to say
do read my desires
once in a way...

have an exotic night or day
where ever you are...
you may...
this is my thought for today

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words: 
O beloveds
Editing stage: 
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content


Hi! I think this is definitely one of my favourites that you have written. I find with this one, the meter is structured in such a way that helps me to get into the rhythm of the poem!!! I like this new style of poetry you have picked up and I and excited to see the poems you write next!


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