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TEMPERED QUICKENING
Awaken ravens of my havens,
Coven berries quickly becomes mourning dues of morning dews!!!
As lightning consumes and thunder quickens,
Reign of storming sleet becomes foes.
Downpours and overwhelms;
Never too over consuming,
Higher warriors of different realms of horizons,
Discovering new pathways and rage of honors,
Amidst still valued morals and values,
Amazing grace with quickening coven of testimonial laws that rules!!!
Teeming with excitement and vigor,
Skills of tempered steel for more......
Encounters of diverging crossroads to ponder and take;
Long suffering of talents and habits to make and partake,
New endless limitations to venture and undertake,
triumph over victory achieved in a senseful getaway!!!!!!
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Esker
Wed, 2016-09-14 22:17
fantastic~
city hall toronto there is a stone box...people can stand on this and talk about
whatever their heart desires and you can have a megahorn too...
when I lived in the city I loved books..but I liked the street prophets and poets
who spoke aloud....they had messages...they believed in what they were
sharing....authentic poet passion in their works...a lot of them were
out there....the message a bit too much...but they believed...they believed
more then those with everything who sad in darkness come dusk doubting
all their treasures about them they worked hard too obtain
thank u!