'us as an – ony – mous – ... face' - so clever
and ‘cyber / hair’
with ‘to a book’
and ‘real eyes or ears‘

and almost obscure until one seeks it
‘true / turn / burn’
so much here dear rula

but not so keen on all the 'stranges' at the end -
love judy
xxx

... before I comment on this (the poem is... strange and quite unlike you... a pleasing quality is this growth, is it not?). I asked everyone to choose one of the different rhyme types for the second assignment and I can't grok yours. It seems Judyanne recognizes what rhyme type you used (or she was simply taken aback by the poem as I was), but I'm not getting much sleep and can't figure it out. Could you tell me?
In fact, that's another thing I would do differently... If giving a poet a choice in an assigned poem, the poet should label it that we all discern what was attempted.
wesley