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although you have heard it so many times
and know by now the stupid lines
"its worth it" "its fine"
those words mean nothing
you haven't lived yet please come with me
and see how beautiful life can be
even just for now or forever more
you don't have to shut the door
your not alone
even if not shown
others struggle too
its not just you
although you may have finished school
grown an extra 2 foot tall
seen the blossom on the trees
felt the ocean hug your knees
it may feel enough
but lifes not just tough
open your eyes to the beauty of our world
let it happen let it go
make the most dont hold onto the past
for any day could be your last
stay with me and you will see
just how magical the world can be.

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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How does this theme appeal to you?
Last few words: 
i hope you enjoyed this also if you ever need help im always here as i mentioned you are never alone.
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Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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very much. I think it is a very personal write for you. It shows. Nice first post, welcome to Neopoet. I hope to see you join our contests, challenges and workshops. ~ Geezer.
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