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Soulful silence!

Soulful silence

Let souls live in peace
when they part
we know not
where they go ere they depart!

but leave tearful
but silent emotions
in ever human heart
let it glow
and
that's all what about
souls I know

We are all ''soles,''
Individual entities
we must know
once we are left
without
but
we leave others
bereft
without a doubt...

Let us continue to
live a life of Hope

We all must in silence
only pray
when the 'one ‘departs
from this Earth
and goes far away
into the eternal entity's of Time
Eternity to Eternity
none know
how many....

But let Peace
alone be our Hope
left by us behind
as our Legacy
for the remaining mankind
to continue its journey
as we did since
silence!

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A great write young Bard, but always remember all those souls are but a thought away and one day when your Time means nothing maybe you will join me in a up of tea and we can talk for an eternity or near,
Take care and know that our thoughts are forever flowing outward, we will collect a few good ones and give you brownie points for your life..
Yours as always Ian..

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Yours as always, Ian.T, Sparrow, and Yenti

when you go earlier,, or follow

take some snacks
biscuits and coffee
you know i like it

gods stalls may not open
for a long tym
and bards u and me
will be left out of line

but yes lets earmark an rv
you know what is tis
where will it be near about
a lonesome apple tree
may be
a new Adam and Eve may still be playing
like we once did
having now may
be a sweeter and more jovial
humourous
bright blushing nectar like kid

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