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Smile and be Happy

Smile
as long as you can
Shed a tear
that also of joy
O woman
O man

life is full
of endless pains
why add more
for no purpose
nor gains

love life
as it comes along
live each day happily
as long as to this Earth
we all belong

live a life
full of happiness
sing a sweet song

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your little heart out, lovedly! 'Tis true, 'tis true, a song a day keeps the heart young and gay! ~ Gee.
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Come to Chat on the Darkside
every other Saturday night 8pm to ?
Bring your dark and delicious work
to show.

but of olden days Gee

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thinking any other way, lovedly.

Come to Chat on the Darkside
every other Saturday night 8pm to ?
Bring your dark and delicious work
to show.

humour is life GEE
gay is just a mile stone in life
which way for whom
heaven and only he knows

be happy
I like you frankness

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this would really make a nice song. It looks easy, but it isn't. the words fits.
I'd try to find someone to put it to music.
Not me, Alas!

Eumolpus
I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing
than teach ten thousand stars how not to dance
ee cummings

Wow Eumol
that will be lovely
Thanks

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We must treasure age as it's a privilege denied many

thanks for your invaluable sayings
stan

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ON NEO

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