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To Sir with Love Dear Jess

Submitted by lovedly on Fri, 2015-11-20 23:16

To Sir with Love
By Lovedly

I really miss you so,
What a poet
would ever I have been
Jess
if you had been so kind
not to kick me

The deserving get the salutations
and
you are Jess
above all my hearts palpitations

without your kicks on my behind
I would have been lost
and
just left far behind
in this vast ocean
I call time

not without
any reason or rhyme...

Jess you are a man so refine
you can alone determine
a diamond
out of a god forsaken mine
those who know like me only

I bow to thee......>>>>
and now once again
you may kick me
for not saying ye
with love from
Lovedly

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft

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Geezer

Sun, 2015-11-22 16:37

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to one who would always let you know where you are and where you should be. Nice work, lovedly.
~ Gee

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lovedly

Sun, 2015-11-22 18:50

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